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Post by spookythings on Oct 21, 2006 7:09:37 GMT -5
rewriting to try to reduce the current levels of crap.
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Post by Princess Eleanor on Oct 21, 2006 9:28:17 GMT -5
I LOVE IT! YOU DID A GREAT JOB! *curtsy*
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Post by PrinceJoshua on Oct 21, 2006 10:53:36 GMT -5
Rusty!?! Your doing a perfect job! I cant wait to read the next chapter. Keep it up! ;D
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Ralph Goat
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Post by Ralph Goat on Oct 21, 2006 14:52:58 GMT -5
You're not rusty at all, you're a great writer! Very descriptive, and you made Jennifer's thoughts seem like her own.
Haha, "Jenni-fuh!". That's awesome. XD
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Post by spookythings on Oct 21, 2006 15:55:23 GMT -5
thank you all so much.  i checked this thread last because i was so nervous. i love the way joshua pronounces her name during the game. 'dee-uh jenn-ih-fuuuuhhh! *cackles*' i couldn't spell it any other way when coming from him. |
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i checked this thread last because i was so nervous.