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Post by winterperfume on Mar 2, 2007 12:29:27 GMT -5
I've been holding onto this for a few months since I wasn't sure how good it was, but I figured now is as good a time as any to post it. "Knight" |
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Post by PrincessJennifer on Mar 2, 2007 15:02:30 GMT -5
I reviewed!^^ What a great story-I hope we see more from you! How come she missed Gregory at the end? I would too, but I wanted to hear your reason for it.
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Post by winterperfume on Mar 2, 2007 16:09:43 GMT -5
I think Jennifer, after spending some time in the orphanage, would begin to see that she was better off with Gregory, who gave her a lot more than the orphanage ever did.
It seems that she ran away from him because she wanted friends and thought she could find something better at the orphanage. The grass wasn't any greener on the other side though and she only had one "friend" (and eventually she'd have Brown) there. So, now that Jennifer's there, I think she would begin to miss Gregory, who truly cared for her, despite his delusions. But she can't run back, she's already too blinded by selfish Wendy. Poor thing.
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Post by PrincessJennifer on Mar 2, 2007 16:13:57 GMT -5
I would run back. But then, I never would have left him in the first place.^^;
Your story really was an inspiration. It made me want to write a sequel to my work-in-progress.*.*. I really do hope you write more.
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Post by Princess Eleanor on Mar 2, 2007 16:17:11 GMT -5
I LOVED IT! I left a review! So good! ^^
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Post by PrincessJennifer on Mar 2, 2007 16:21:09 GMT -5
I also added it to the Rose Garden archive with all the other good fics.^^
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Post by winterperfume on Mar 2, 2007 23:31:43 GMT -5
Wow! Thanks! I feel honored to be part of an archive!
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Post by avidgamer77 on Mar 3, 2007 9:55:49 GMT -5
What a nice segment! I like it!
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Post by PrincessJennifer on Mar 7, 2007 2:59:01 GMT -5
I really hope you decide to write a fic about Gregory.*.*
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Post by winterperfume on Mar 7, 2007 8:13:46 GMT -5
Me too. One is brewing in my head.  |
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Post by PrincessJennifer on Mar 7, 2007 14:33:07 GMT -5
*.* YES!!!
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