Post by battleblaze on Apr 11, 2007 22:41:25 GMT -5
I cna't seem to upload this to Fanfic...I keep getting errors and the help site...well the help site isn't there. Is FF.ney having some downtime? Well here it is. I was originally going to post when I had 2 chapters but one should be enough here. Be gentle its my first time (writng a fanfic).
[glow=red,2,300]Rule Of Rose-The Last Lock[/glow]
Chapter 1-Enter Superman
Well I don't own Sony quite yet...SO Rule Of Rose is not my original creation. But this story is...
This story jumps back and forth in time to before and after the orphanage, so pay attention to that...Not much else to say, this will be on ongoing thing, so look for more chapters.
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"Miss Jenn! Miss Jenn! Read me this one!"
Jennifer was in a bit of a daze before then, but the title of the book was a rude awakening. "The Little Princess." Jennifer said very slowly, almost to herself.
"Yea that one!" The little girl had the biggest smile, Miss Jenn told the best stories.
"Sorry May, not this story..." Jennifer said quietly.
"Why not!" The little girl crossed her arms and pouted.
"Because May...It's far too sad." Jennifer seemed to be in a far away place.
The little girl pouted and stomped the ground, but upon looking at Miss Jenn's sad expresion, May suddenly seemed sullen. "I'm sooooorry Miss Jenn." The little girl looked like she was about to cry.
"No need to be sorry its not you're fault." Jennifer hid her frown and picked up the little girl. "Now give me a big hug May."
Jennifer hugged the sniffling little child and danced around with May in her arms. Jennifer was so caught up in keeping May from crying she didn't hear the door open.
"Mommy!" Little May lept from Jennifers arms and ran to the woman at the door.
"You're magic with kids Jenn! I can never get May occupied for more than 30 minutes, but you can do it all day long!"
"That's because you stink at telling stories Mommy." May playfully pouted at her mother.
"Well I guess I'll have to learn from Miss Jenn now won't I?" May's mother winked at Jennifer. Jennifer simply smiled and shrugged. "I guess we will be getting along now then. Say bye bye May."
"Bye Bye Miss Jenn!" The little girl did huge wavingmotions with her arms. May and her mother went throught he door and with that that, they were gone.
Jennifer sighed deeply.
"The Little Princess..." Jennifer looked out her large picture window. London was a very busy place in the middle of the 19th century. All the events happening were a little scary, but she needed the constant noise in the backround, to know that people were always out there. Someone would hear her if she screamed...She opened the book to the last page. She never did write down "The End." Was it because it was the story of her life, or was there somthing she didn't remember. Somthing important she forgot about...Jennifer sighed deeply.
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"3241 Rose street eh?"
"Yes it's the right place, you idoit."
"Hmm, fitting I'd say. Let's keep moving"
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"Welcome to the Red Crayon Aristocracy young, uh..."
"My name is James, not 'UH' miss." The scruffy little boy looked scared but stuck out his chest, trying to stay strong. The little children snickered.
"Hmph! You...you.." Meg was at furious and shaking her notebook in anger. But Meg was so small there wasn't much she could do asgainst a boy so big.
"You'll answer to what we call you." Diana hopped off her place and stomped over to where he was standing. "James the Poor." Diana smiles face to face with the boy, them being the same height, then punches James square in the stomach.
James falls to the ground instantly gasping for breath and clawing at the ground. On his knees coughing, James looks up at Diana's cold smile.
Satisfied, Diana curtseys deeply."I'm Duchess Diana by the way."
Her skirt still lifting.
James' eyes widen.
Diana chuckles softly and drops her skirt walking away slowly.
James' eyes follow Diana back to her throne, then slowly drift down to floor feeling rather low.
"Right." Meg cleared her mind and got back on topic. "Jimmy, you currently have the rank of poor, you will be expected to make an offering to the princess every month, if it's not something of value you WILL regret it." Meg seemed happy at this thought. The little children seemed to be nervous.
"Hats off to you you." Amanda clapped slowly as she and everyone else walked away, leaving James cold and alone.
Although he still couldn't get up, James slowly took out and old rolled up comic book and looked at the cover.
"L-looks like it's just me and you still Superman."
The very dirty boy smiled weakly, then passed out.
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Well that's the first chapter of the first fanfic I've ever written.The plot will gain speed I swear. I'll start working ont he second right about...now.
[glow=red,2,300]Rule Of Rose-The Last Lock[/glow]
Chapter 1-Enter Superman
Well I don't own Sony quite yet...SO Rule Of Rose is not my original creation. But this story is...
This story jumps back and forth in time to before and after the orphanage, so pay attention to that...Not much else to say, this will be on ongoing thing, so look for more chapters.
++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
"Miss Jenn! Miss Jenn! Read me this one!"
Jennifer was in a bit of a daze before then, but the title of the book was a rude awakening. "The Little Princess." Jennifer said very slowly, almost to herself.
"Yea that one!" The little girl had the biggest smile, Miss Jenn told the best stories.
"Sorry May, not this story..." Jennifer said quietly.
"Why not!" The little girl crossed her arms and pouted.
"Because May...It's far too sad." Jennifer seemed to be in a far away place.
The little girl pouted and stomped the ground, but upon looking at Miss Jenn's sad expresion, May suddenly seemed sullen. "I'm sooooorry Miss Jenn." The little girl looked like she was about to cry.
"No need to be sorry its not you're fault." Jennifer hid her frown and picked up the little girl. "Now give me a big hug May."
Jennifer hugged the sniffling little child and danced around with May in her arms. Jennifer was so caught up in keeping May from crying she didn't hear the door open.
"Mommy!" Little May lept from Jennifers arms and ran to the woman at the door.
"You're magic with kids Jenn! I can never get May occupied for more than 30 minutes, but you can do it all day long!"
"That's because you stink at telling stories Mommy." May playfully pouted at her mother.
"Well I guess I'll have to learn from Miss Jenn now won't I?" May's mother winked at Jennifer. Jennifer simply smiled and shrugged. "I guess we will be getting along now then. Say bye bye May."
"Bye Bye Miss Jenn!" The little girl did huge wavingmotions with her arms. May and her mother went throught he door and with that that, they were gone.
Jennifer sighed deeply.
"The Little Princess..." Jennifer looked out her large picture window. London was a very busy place in the middle of the 19th century. All the events happening were a little scary, but she needed the constant noise in the backround, to know that people were always out there. Someone would hear her if she screamed...She opened the book to the last page. She never did write down "The End." Was it because it was the story of her life, or was there somthing she didn't remember. Somthing important she forgot about...Jennifer sighed deeply.
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"3241 Rose street eh?"
"Yes it's the right place, you idoit."
"Hmm, fitting I'd say. Let's keep moving"
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
"Welcome to the Red Crayon Aristocracy young, uh..."
"My name is James, not 'UH' miss." The scruffy little boy looked scared but stuck out his chest, trying to stay strong. The little children snickered.
"Hmph! You...you.." Meg was at furious and shaking her notebook in anger. But Meg was so small there wasn't much she could do asgainst a boy so big.
"You'll answer to what we call you." Diana hopped off her place and stomped over to where he was standing. "James the Poor." Diana smiles face to face with the boy, them being the same height, then punches James square in the stomach.
James falls to the ground instantly gasping for breath and clawing at the ground. On his knees coughing, James looks up at Diana's cold smile.
Satisfied, Diana curtseys deeply."I'm Duchess Diana by the way."
Her skirt still lifting.
James' eyes widen.
Diana chuckles softly and drops her skirt walking away slowly.
James' eyes follow Diana back to her throne, then slowly drift down to floor feeling rather low.
"Right." Meg cleared her mind and got back on topic. "Jimmy, you currently have the rank of poor, you will be expected to make an offering to the princess every month, if it's not something of value you WILL regret it." Meg seemed happy at this thought. The little children seemed to be nervous.
"Hats off to you you." Amanda clapped slowly as she and everyone else walked away, leaving James cold and alone.
Although he still couldn't get up, James slowly took out and old rolled up comic book and looked at the cover.
"L-looks like it's just me and you still Superman."
The very dirty boy smiled weakly, then passed out.
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Well that's the first chapter of the first fanfic I've ever written.The plot will gain speed I swear. I'll start working ont he second right about...now.
