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Post by notquitenecessary on Nov 23, 2006 19:17:49 GMT -5
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Post by PrincessJennifer on Nov 24, 2006 20:48:07 GMT -5
It was fairly good, but the first two paragraphs are duplicated. Also, there are a few spelling errors. And Eleanor is anything but shy.^^
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Post by spookythings on Nov 24, 2006 20:51:53 GMT -5
i liked it a lot! i did notice the duplicated first paragraphs though. i also liked the different take on diana, although i saw her tears as fake and manipulative, i'd like to read more about your interpretations. any plans to further expand?
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Post by notquitenecessary on Dec 10, 2006 20:10:51 GMT -5
I don't think I'll write anymore, because the ending is too poinient (SP?) to ruin, but I will iterate on what I beleive Diana is. Check the theories section.
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