Post by fireflyprince on Oct 22, 2006 18:20:58 GMT -5
I'm afraid to write this, since I have not played the game and do not fully understand it.
Basicly it takes place during a Southern American Civil War setting. I think a Finishing School for young girls would be a perfect setting.
The character of my story is a young girl who grew up in a southern plantation and was raped by an older boy, but her father thought she had volunteer sex and punished her by sending her to a Girl's Boarding School.
While this girl gets sent to the Boarding School she meets a group of girls who have formed their own club like the Red Crayon Artisocrats. They have rankings, and the highest is the Rose Princess.
Other ranking include the Lilly Princess, Tulip Princess, Magnolia Princess, and Weed Princess(lowest ranking).
This girl is ranked as the Weed Princess. She is considered an unwanted weed in the beautiful garden of graceful and elegant girls.
The girl had to do horrible things to get her rank higher.
Meanwhile she befriends a black girl who works as a servent in the school and is the daughter of the gardener. This girl can not be a princess because she is black and is a servent. The other princesses often act mean to her and throw things at her.
This African American girl talks the new girl into murdering the leaders so that they can take over the club. So the new girl takes a revolver and murders the Rose Princess, but suffers from shock from what she did. When the police arrived they accused the black servent girl's father as being the murderer and sentence him to be hanged. After the death of the Rose Princess the Weed Princess assumed the rank because the other girls knew what she did and chose her as their leader out of fear.
However the black girl became angry at the princess for the death of her father and refused to talk to her, and the new Rose Princess tried to make it up to her by giving her a higher rank and presenting her with the gift of a pink rose which stood for friendship, but the black girl destroyed the rose and scrached herself on the thorns. She vowed one day that she would have her revenge on the Rose Princess.
As the girls grew older the Rose Princess's father died in battle during the Civil War, and the Rose Princess was left an orphan without money. So she was force to leave the school and leave the ranking of Rose Princess. She left her memories behind. Eventually the school was burned down by Union Soldiers, but the garden around the old school still exists. Now the princess lives as a young woman who lives on a small farm and is struggling to live after the war. One day she recieves a mysterious letter inviting her to a part held at a school reuinion, which she finds impossible because her school was burned down.
She boards a deserted train that takes her to places from her forgotten past and this is how the story begins.
The monsters in this story resemble animals from the Garden of Eden told in the Bible. They have angel bodies but animal heads and often carry weapons. During the Christine teachings in the school the girls conjured up a tail about angels with animal heads that lived in the garden around the school and punished the girls who couldn't act "sophisticated".
I know it may sound kind of weird, and I haven't fully worked it out yet, but what do you all think of it?
Basicly it takes place during a Southern American Civil War setting. I think a Finishing School for young girls would be a perfect setting.
The character of my story is a young girl who grew up in a southern plantation and was raped by an older boy, but her father thought she had volunteer sex and punished her by sending her to a Girl's Boarding School.
While this girl gets sent to the Boarding School she meets a group of girls who have formed their own club like the Red Crayon Artisocrats. They have rankings, and the highest is the Rose Princess.
Other ranking include the Lilly Princess, Tulip Princess, Magnolia Princess, and Weed Princess(lowest ranking).
This girl is ranked as the Weed Princess. She is considered an unwanted weed in the beautiful garden of graceful and elegant girls.
The girl had to do horrible things to get her rank higher.
Meanwhile she befriends a black girl who works as a servent in the school and is the daughter of the gardener. This girl can not be a princess because she is black and is a servent. The other princesses often act mean to her and throw things at her.
This African American girl talks the new girl into murdering the leaders so that they can take over the club. So the new girl takes a revolver and murders the Rose Princess, but suffers from shock from what she did. When the police arrived they accused the black servent girl's father as being the murderer and sentence him to be hanged. After the death of the Rose Princess the Weed Princess assumed the rank because the other girls knew what she did and chose her as their leader out of fear.
However the black girl became angry at the princess for the death of her father and refused to talk to her, and the new Rose Princess tried to make it up to her by giving her a higher rank and presenting her with the gift of a pink rose which stood for friendship, but the black girl destroyed the rose and scrached herself on the thorns. She vowed one day that she would have her revenge on the Rose Princess.
As the girls grew older the Rose Princess's father died in battle during the Civil War, and the Rose Princess was left an orphan without money. So she was force to leave the school and leave the ranking of Rose Princess. She left her memories behind. Eventually the school was burned down by Union Soldiers, but the garden around the old school still exists. Now the princess lives as a young woman who lives on a small farm and is struggling to live after the war. One day she recieves a mysterious letter inviting her to a part held at a school reuinion, which she finds impossible because her school was burned down.
She boards a deserted train that takes her to places from her forgotten past and this is how the story begins.
The monsters in this story resemble animals from the Garden of Eden told in the Bible. They have angel bodies but animal heads and often carry weapons. During the Christine teachings in the school the girls conjured up a tail about angels with animal heads that lived in the garden around the school and punished the girls who couldn't act "sophisticated".
I know it may sound kind of weird, and I haven't fully worked it out yet, but what do you all think of it?